All Comments on 'A Lesson From Mr. Schiller'

Interesting premise.

But the blowjob happens much to abruptly. What would have been bad about her learning how to touch and play with his cock before the blowjob itself? Why nothing with her body? None of her clothes came off -- or even loosened or unbuttoned. Why?

Why did blowjob have to be so one sided? Nothing for her? No touching? No playing?

Seems almost like a glory hole blowjob. No interaction other than mouth and cock.

Three stars.

The previous comment by anonymous had little merit - so it wasn't a great blowjob - she was a complete novice, remember?

The quality of the writing - the pacing - the plot -the vocabulary - the conclusion - make this a five star plus

It is a travesty - no, anonymous' comment that the story was deficient as a description of a perfect blowjob is correct, and if that is what he is looking for, well, good for him, but why bother reading the same story over and over again? This story was truly original - a quality not usually found on this site, and even then not rewarded

I for one congratulate the author on a splendid debut and hope she can follow it with many more

Witton (I can't get logged in this morning and wanted to post this now)

the dialogue felt weird, even though this is a hot premise.

...practice, practice practice. The soul of the story is well done - now you simply need to shake it out. I want to say we feel rushed through but it feels more like you are forcing us to an end. Pull back, watch the story unfold - both the story and your writing will be the better for it. That said - this was one solid good read!

so hot!

so hot!