All Comments on 'A Lesson in Glamor'

Loved it. Please continue.

A good start, needs a bit more!

I have not encountered a story like this one yet.

It is rather exciting !

One down fall like so many of the stories on here is the extreme overuse of the word " AND ".

Writers, please be a bit more creative with your conjunctive words used to connect parts of a sentence or phrase . If you do not already own a thesaurus, please buy one. Or find a service offered online.

I own a hard back college addition Which i picked up in a thrift store for one dollar. I also carry a smaller

paper back addition when traveling. But actually, I find using GOOGLE'S " Hey Google " to be so much faster. I keep my cell at the ready when writing. Be it a story or a comment on a story such as this. Or writing a news paper article for submission to my local small town weekly addition of " The Sentinel " .

I hope to find a continuation of this story soon !

This offering should get even more thrilling as it takes us deep into the wickedly lustful, torrid, as well as enventive mind of this author.

She writes some interesting stuff !

Keep at it girl !

My only critique is I feel he accepted what was happening way too easily, are ghosts commonplace or something?

Another story that I liked. I like the twist you employee in your stories to make the gender transition so much more interesting. I hope you’re going to give us readers more chapters so we can see what you devious mind can come up with. I love a devious mind. 😈😋