by bidemoness226
To tell and to describe are different. A lot of telling in this story not much describing.
"The only time she ever did" feels sad. Still, very hot and sensual.
Wonderfull, please dont stop with this story. Bitersweet.
Wonderfully written...classy, not trashy but very very erotic. Thank you for sharing!
I think it was done very well.
Please keep writing more like this.
Very sweet, sensitive, and beautifully written. Thank you.