All Comments on 'A Lesson in Lust'

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SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireabout 2 years ago

"Is it supposed to steam?" Maybe the oil shouldn't but this really did and was cute, too! There were a few minor typos or missing words (someone was going to come before he got her panties off for one) but nothing significant. In the end, very well done with the opportunity to continue it if you wish. Great job!

wildhunterwildhunterover 2 years ago

Very well written, I thought a little quick getting to the SEX part

but it ended amazingly well

Brilliant job- Thanks

You have left my cock aching and a smile on my face

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