All Comments on 'A Lesson Learned'

The text flowed well and the action was easy to follow. You did a fine job describing both points of view (though I know you were worried about the chick's side of it) The only thing I noted that was wrong was some minor spelling and punctuation problems but even these did not detract overall from the story and pacing. WEll done, Nyte..

Now, doesn't that just sound like terrific fun! *evil grin*

Luv your writing tons!