by Nyte_BlackRose
Now, doesn't that just sound like terrific fun! *evil grin*
Luv your writing tons!
The text flowed well and the action was easy to follow. You did a fine job describing both points of view (though I know you were worried about the chick's side of it) The only thing I noted that was wrong was some minor spelling and punctuation problems but even these did not detract overall from the story and pacing. WEll done, Nyte..