All Comments on 'A Letter from Aleppo'

by ColonelB

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Yes, more would be good, but Angie needs to back off the mistress/slave stuff. A little role play of that is okay, but please don’t turn Angie from a sexy, talented and fun wife/nurse into a flaming bitch.

MedicalpeteMedicalpete12 months ago

I agree with anon! I think I would like to read more fun and sexy encounters rather than a dominating bitch. Still you need to write as you feel!

tbone231tbone23111 months ago

This is very hot! The dominance thing made it hotter. D/S is your thing, so do what you do. Has Angie always been dominant, or is this new? There's lots to process about D/S and how these people get there. There is also lots of opportunity for hot sex scenes. More, please!

SirKevinSirKevin11 months ago

Definitely would enjoy more, and while the turn at the end wasn't entirely a surprise, I enjoyed it.

Only notes: Dominant is hot, cruel is less so. Consent is paramount.

Looking forward to more of the story, and thank you for sharing this part. PM me if you want an editor/proofreader for the next chapter.

rglobalguyrglobalguy11 months ago

More please, lots more!

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