All Comments on 'A Little Accident'

Maybe they invited Paul home for dinner and dessert? Loved the story! Five Stars -- JB

This is a story of rape. Multiple rape. Not erotic. Quite dreadful behaviour.

There’s an erotic nature to deciding you want something you just dont want to say it out loud

I love it when young ladies learn from their indiscretions.

I completely approve, as another Australian and Paul's mate.

Well done Ashson! When faced with a tangible result, that you can not physically change. Just hang on and 'Grin and Bare It!'

Your stories are terrible and all basically the same. What's annoying is that the ideas aren't bad and if infused with a little more passion and realism they could be satisfying, but your writing of characters, especially female characters, is so unrealistic all I can do is roll my eyes. Your male characters are all so nonchalant they seem actually bored with what they're doing, and you make the female characters so passive they are like bystanders to their own rape and seem more irritated than anything at being forced into sex. I try to avoid any stories with your name on them but there are so many that I inadvertently end up reading some anyway and am always disappointed at the poor execution of what could have been a decent story

I really liked this one...the reader got a two-fer!!!

Oddly enough it is highly likely that you will find stories that could be classified as rape when you're reading in a NonConsent section.

Perhaps you'd be better off reading stories from a different section.