All Comments on 'A Little Discipline'

Another great story.

For once, you’ve presented a story that could easily begin a journey of discovery for this girl. One that will cause her to grow, and change, and probably develop a multi tiered relationship Paul that could lead them both to become someone different than they were at the start.

But, of course, that would require an author capable of pathos and humanity. Not likely.

ASHON: “And there! Another meaningless wank worthy tale. My job here is done.”

Do you actually know how to write a story that isn't about you raping someone, then pretending it's okay because they end up 'liking it'? Because if you did, I might enjoy reading that.

A reasonably short story that entertains the majority of readers, but not the critics. Good job well written maybe you should warm people on this site of the content in advance.