by DaddysGoldenGirl
I'm new to both erotica and BDSM.. but WOW! This has fully intrigued me! Beautifully written and I love the characters! Please write more!
Thank you so much for your lovely comments, I love to know that people read my stories and what they think :)
An excellent first story, I hope to read more from you. Thanks
I've been thinking about something along the 'loss of control' route, and I thought I'd look this story over.
I gave it a five. Decent writing, forthright plot and development. Overall fun to read. These things can get dark if the author isn't careful.
Stay with it. You'll get more comments with time.