All Comments on 'A Little Tied Up...'

I am the author of this story and it is the first erotic story I have ever written. I would be very grateful if anyone would rate or comment on the story to give me feedback so I know how to improve my work for the next story! Thank you for reading!

Personal preference, for me, is to let the pace and information in a story set divulge motive and history as required. A good read.

Keep it up, guy/gal.

A great start to a writing career! Thank you, welcome and please have five stars from me.

Yes, this is well written, (with a few exceptions of the accidental switch of a few words) BUT, I'm just not sure this belongs in the lesbian section. There is this constant feeling that this highly involves the "male gaze" making it more voyeuristic than lesbian.

I liked it :-)

the guy in this is nothing more than a wimp, not helping his partner get out of that, and watching his gf do that to her, and chance's gf doing that to her, she should have left her after that

Any chance of a sequel to this story?

I'm really looking forward to the next one.