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All Comments on 'A Long Farewell'

by EwanMcIan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A bit short, no real background on the characters, but well done.

Now we have to wait for further submissions. Please do it soon.

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 1 year ago

Good start, I liked the pace of your story and hope you are going to write more please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nice first story. Brian was a waste and unneeded.

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