All Comments on 'A Long Massage'

First, this story was poorly written. It was not at all sexy (IMHO).

Second, it should have been labeled Anal. which is something I don't care for. I would have given it a pass. As is, I spent an unpleasant few minutes reading it.

Thus, the 0 rating.

I thought that there was sufficient sexual content to get a much better rating so I maxed it out. I guess the story needed puffing up a little but overall it was okay. Just keep writing and they will get better. Thanks

Short and sweet!