by pocketmw
Very well written story, on all fronts. Your flow felt almost too easy or something. And your ending was nothing short of champion. I loved it. Yeah, a real pleasure to read, this one was. Am definitely looking forward to reading more of your work.
This was a perfect story of lovemaking if only porn would show this to men they would know what real sex is like
It almost felt like I was reading about how my lover and I make love. Nicely and descriptively written. Look forward to reading more of your stories.
Damn, that made me hot! Excellent job, this story is one of my favorites!