All Comments on 'A Lost Daughter Ch. 16'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Super hot threesome! One of your best scenes ever and exactly the kind of thing I was hoping for when the idea of bringing in other girls was teased. I really like how Sienna's character has developed, Kayla's introduction has allowed us to see another side of her that wouldn't show up otherwise. I wonder where the girls were going before Matt interrupted?

Thanks for not making us wait too long for the new chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Is there any chance we can get the next part any time soon?

PiusPaulPiusPaulalmost 3 years ago

I love the corruption – and the women's willingness to let themselves be corrupted.

"I'm going to destroy her," Amber panted as she approached orgasm ... SO HOT!

I have been longing some time already for next chapter ... hopefully you will get it published soon?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The next chapter has been up on your pattern for 2 months. I used to pay for your Patreon but you hardly ever post and you are very unreliable. I don’t think it’s too selfish or entitled to ask for the next chapter to be included here seeing as you finished it in June

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story love it!

Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Dude WTH. Chapter 17 has existed for months but is still behind a paywall?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I still believe in him and I wish him nothing but the best in whatever personal situation is going on. I just wish we could get at least a little communication on this end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Guy is always having problems. He hasn’t uploaded 17 because he waits until the next is uploaded on his patreon otherwise people would pull their money which I understand. Anyway I thought I’d check one more time but I’m done with it. Good luck to him, I’m forgetting about this series it’s not worth it

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

just to clear up some confusion, those on patreon are not paying per month, but per creation

DrockkDrockkover 2 years ago

Are you still continuing to write the story, favorite author yet on here!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

are you gonna continue this or should i give up on this series

GUIWriter577GUIWriter577almost 2 years agoAuthor

Hey guys, lots of misconceptions about my Patreon from people who would benefit from actually reading the description on the page itself. My patreon is a 'PAY PER CREATION' page, meaning if I don't post anything, my Patreon are not being charged anything. So no one is paying money and not receiving anything. Additionally, after posting my last chapter and taking a break (for good reasons personally) I DID try to post that chapter here. For some reason it was sent back to me and went unpublished, but since I did not log into this page for over a year I have just now realized it. It has been re-uploaded and will be published as soon as Literotica approves it. Thanks for everyone who has been understanding, and I apologize for my absences. Life gets in the way sometimes, but I appreciate everyone who has gotten some enjoyment from my stories. Take care :)

Terri19Terri19about 1 year ago

Hot love both girls pleasing him!

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After many years of requests I have created a 'PAY PER CREATION' Patreon page, which means if I don't write, you DON'T PAY. I just simply have not been able to afford to work on writing when my day job takes up so much of my time. My Patreon means that writing in place of work...

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