All Comments on 'A Love Refined Ch. 01'

This is a wonderfully erotic story from an author who really knows how to turn her readers on! I especially loved that sub/dom part of the story when Meredith surrendered her curvy body to her new female lover, particularly that moment when she offered up her ass as though she was the newly purchased slavegirl of a powerful bodybuilding mistress who wanted more than anything else to satisfy her lusts by taking the woman's gorgeous ass with her tongue from behind. Very hot! An excellent read!

The detail is wonderful, the action hot.

An excellent story of passion between two dissimilar women who find themselves so alike. I'm a bi-female and have had my own fantasies about muscled-up women and my imagery is confirmed by this author. This story says much for all of us whose fantasies may yet come true.

Love between a Female Body Builder and a gorgeous lady is scorchin hot and would love to read more

When's their wedding?

So beautiful.

Second time I've read this and it's even more beautiful than the first. Would love to read more of these two. Great writing.

Wow! That was immense. I truly hope there'll be another chapter soon.

such passion and soulful exploration, a stunning story

I just found this story 15 years too late it seems. Great storytelling I will be checking out your other stories right away.

Absolutely the most erotic story I have read on this site in 20 years. So sexy and sensual!! Love it.