All Comments on 'A Love Story: My Father, My Lover'

This is a very well written story. I loved how it progressed nicely.

She didn't want children?

Extremely passionate and well written. Loved it!

What a great debut story, love this hot father daughter incest tale. Hope to read more from you soon. top score vote.

What a wonderful father/daughter love story! I thought it was just an excellent first effort. I truly hope you will favor us with many more of your stories. This was worth a very well deserved Five Stars rating!

The way they profess their love to each other was too frequent and over the top, I know this is erotica but com'on... A 23 year old woman passed out from rejection? at least make it semi believable

There were also not enough conflict In the story, you did it right by making the father trying to do the right thing by forcing her to move out but sadly he didn't stick through it, a lot more drama could be written had she moved out you know

Very nice effort. I enjoyed your story. Jess was a little whiny and dramatic for my taste but I think dad's reactions were pretty spot on for a caring father. Was dad going to defend or reveal his relationship somehow at the party after seeing Jess so upset? I also wondered was the neighbor going to show up and catch them after the party? Why did dad give his successful and well to do son his credit card to order dinner, and why didn't he knock on their door when the food arrived? After the party and dad told Jess how deep his feelings were and he always wanted to be with her and such was Jess going to say something like, "I'm glad you feel that way because we are going to have a baby." Keep up the good effort.

Perhaps a child for Jessica & "grandchild/child" for Justin....

That was an amazing story! You put so much effort and detail into it and I loved it so much!! :D

What a beautiful story! Very well written, I hope you continue to write more stories, if this story is any indication of what is to come, than I can not wait to read what you come up with next. Five Huge Stars!!!

I like how you had dad's wall come down slowly. This type of writing takes patience and skill from the writer and I think you did a wonderful job. Makes for a hotter consummation scene when it's delayed but obvious that it will eventually come. Thanks for the wonderful story.

A beautiful relationship between a father and his daughter.

I loved that! It was so brilliantly written. I was sad to have had it come to an end. I hope that you'll write more stories, or even a sequel. That would be awesome. I'm blown away.

Perfect story... Thanks!

I swear, i have never cried so much at a story. In fact i dont cry at things. But it was just so touching ans so heart warming i did. I cried when she was out in the storm and when he wouldnt admit he loved her. I cried when he called her baby as she was sitting under the tree. You get my point. I cried through the whole thing. It was amazing. You are such a skilled writer. Thanks for sharing. Best luck for future writing. Xx

Zara Tehali.

Such a beautiful story. You have written a masterpiece. I went from happiness to tears and back to happiness. Job extremely well done. I hope you choose to write more similarly themed stories in the future. Very well done. Thank you

This has been one of the best stories I've read on here. It was seriously awesome.

your story is so so compelling and yet soooooo hot i tip my hat to that kind of true passionate love and envy it

Amazing... Passionate and lovely.

i was so sad when it ended i was so eager to to get to the end i was hoping for a baby to be in the mix but i just had to say this was the most beautiful story that i ever read thank you for writing this

I cried omg I want more of this story <3 definitely one of the best ones I've read on here ^.^

Please write more stories - especially ones like this! <3

I layed down in bed after work.the wife went shopping&said I will be back in 2 or 3 hours& my18 year old oversexed daughter came running into the room naked.&jumped in bed with me&fucked me like a wild woman for a hour.she got up&said I love you.&went in& took a shower.she came back in&sat in a chair with her robe on.i said what are you doing.she had a great big smile& said im waiting for mom&i love her too.im going to fuck her when she gets home.

Shades of perfection.... such utter devotion, love and passion!

Please write more...

I laughed, I teared up a bit. Great read.

You are gifted.... Extremely passionate and well written. Loved it!

PLEASE write more... More amazing love tales like this masterpiece.

It's truly mesmerizing how you managed to depict their incestuous romance despite the father's struggle. The daughter's devotions is nothing but pure beauty in all it's forms... This daughter is simply her father's heaven...

Wow! I've just got to say that was the most amazing story I've read on here. I loved the detail and all of the twists and turns. I could not stop reading it. I've always just read the stories on here but never joined, until now. I just had to join up to tell you how much I enjoyed this story.

Thank you for this well written story that pulled me along to the end. Hope you find more stories inside you sometime for us to enjoy.

What a great fkn story!! I was a mess. I’m gonna read it again. :)

I Loved This So Much!!!🥺🥰

great writing, amazing story!

This story instantly got to be one of my favorites! I enjoyed the push & pull, the hot lovemaking, but above all, the family. Jamie almost stole the show, what a sweetheart brother he was! It's so sweet that the family support their relationship through & through.

Where can I find someone like Justin? 😭

One of the best Father-Daughter love stories i have read, i wish i can find more of these ...

You're an amazing writer... Please write more!!!!!