All Comments on 'A Love to Last Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

OMG, what happened here? I loved this story, but now it seems to have become ridiculous. You've got David, an adult who's now running a company being sent to his room by his mother, WTF is that. Then there's Elena, still getting away with truly evil things, no one does anything to stop her. How is it possible that Jerome doesn't know what happened at the memorial for Ben's mother yet? Finally, you have Claudia and Elena deciding that their sons are engaged after only dating for two weeks without first consulting them. The only thing that saved chapter #4 was a really great cliffhanger ending. MLF

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

done with this. the women in this story are only one with balls here, the men are all pussies. goodbye!!!!!

dnsontndnsontnover 1 year ago

His father’s sister seems to be the only decent parent in the bunch. Claudia and Elena are a perfect match. Excellent cliffhanger.

aclassyladyaclassyladyover 1 year ago

Well I have read more than one of your stories, and they have been AWESOME!! I am looking forward to the rest of this one. I must say you keep the reader reading for there is more to come as you write. Thank you for entertaining. me to the point of wanting more and more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I have been waiting patiently to drop another bomb on us as always. I am loving this one too I can't wait to dive on chapter 5, understanding that you are busy but please don't keep me waiting too long🤣.

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