by Minnie_La_La
Beautifully written story with a loving plot. The dialogue bout internal and external was excellent. The role of pottery in the story was carefully and actually presented. The lovemaking scenes were well-told and the emphasis on Jake's suckling of Alexandra's breasts was the best I've ever read.
Put a tear in my eye as I imagined I heard Noel Stookey singing the Wedding Song.
THANK YOU FOR WONDERFUL MEMORIES!!!!!!!
Be Well and Happy,
Paul
Very nice, 5/5 This story could easily support a second and final chapter. thanks