All Comments on 'A Loving Family Pt. 01'

Great story, or maybe it's true, either way it was great reading. Made me hard and wanting to fuck guess that's the point. Ethan

Susan uses skills of a poet, an artist and a lover to weave for us and display for us a picture of tender, erotic love. The beautiful tale of a close and caring family. Thanks so much; I await the sequel. GP

I hope this is the first of a series about this loving family! You have set the stage so well, developing believable characters and situations. A truly LOVING family.

We want more!!!!

Oh yes, I loved this beautiful and sensually loving story and ... uh, I wish I could express it more eloquently but I need to take care of something here. Ah, if you would accompany me to the shower??

I love reading the woman's point of view, and it's made my glasses steam up! Speaking of UP ... It's too HARD to write more!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!

hope there will be more to this story

Looking forward to the continuation of this adventure! Extremely well written.

Probably the best story I have ever read on Literotica.

Full of tenderness and love for her family.

Written with, such elegance and style. A master piece.

so eloquent and delicious! a truly loving family! if only i had a daughter!!!!!!!!!

A great story about a mother who not only loves her children very much, but loves her husband enough to want to 'steer' him in the right direction as well. What a family.

I am glad you went to the trouble to repost it.

Parker

I love this story! Very sensual, well written, and well-named. I just hope that they stay a "Loving Family". No sense messing up a good thing. Would be nice to bring in Mommy's girlfriend, too.

Oh, a beautiful well written story by a Master Storyteller, poet and lover. Ms. England cleverly uses her skills as an artist and poet to bring life to a well balanced cast - she breaths life into each character bringing them to life for this reader.

Great story, very easy to get into and feel you where a part of. I read some of the comments on this story and agree it had you wanting more and left lots of possiblities and lots to the imagination. I look forward to hearing more about this family :-)

Imagination here at work,and at it's Peak! I was wondering if literotica.com originated out of the UK? I'm noticing there have been too many Stories and sequels of them that seem to be wriiten using british literature.

An absolutely excellent story, but most of the pleasure for me came from the tenderness, the giving. Thank you.

An absolutely excellent story, but most of the pleasure for me came from the tenderness, the giving. Thank you.

a copyright? seriously? what did that "bloody" accomplish besides putting your full real name on the internet?

lovely story. i actually feel releaved it stopped where it did. this emotional stuff really gets to the core of me...

Truly hot family

What a shame that this story was a stand alone. It should have been part of a series where the family went on to love one another.

The children were UNDERAGE!!!!

great!