All Comments on 'A Mafia Family Ch. 02'

You are an amazing writer, please post next chapter soon. Love the series so far

Finally

Not gonna lie, I skimmed through but plan on reading later so I may find out later but my only question I have is...Why did she jump into bed so easily with Tony? Just because he’s a stud? Hope Tony cucks his dad, takes over his business and maybe even knocks up Eleanor. Can’t wait for more

Just read this chapter and the first.

Seems Tony is to heir to 2 crime families, but could legally take one over and marry into the other after taking out his half-sister's douche bag of a husband, who had a hand in kidnapping his own wife and then ransoming her to force her mother's hand.

Good story in itself with good sex interludes. Please keep the story going, cannot wait till next chapter.

"But Vanessa was not bothered in the slightest, as she knew that with only one phone call she could make her parents buy out the airport and expel every single one of the travellers here." this sounds so absurd that it made me laugh. Even with the mafia thing, this line...

This series is epic. Wonderful build-up, intrigue, mysteries and collusion - perhaps all or nothing in the long term. Power is fleeting. Or not?

I am craving the next part of this powerhouse play, but alas, the author in fact has 'normal' life to deal with, and posting less riveting chapters is keeping him at bay, lest he distract his audience with insignificant drivel, I am sure.

Nevertheless, time Is ticking by, so please neglect real life demands perhaps for just a fraction of time, and embalm us in your talent to live in your fantasy world.

FWW

good work on this series you have my complete attention and I am proud to add you to my list of exceptional writers here don't worry too much on time constraints in getting out new chapters I've met a brilliant writer here who had a series that spanned over the course of a decade although personal note try to avoid leaving years between chapters

Where's chapter 3? I need closure!!

would love to read more asap.

Where's Ch. 03? I hate it when writers don't finish the story.