All Comments on 'A Mage's Tale Ch. 03'

Just wanted to say that this has a huge anount of potential and i hope this continues for quite a while. On a side note i hope you could possubly make chapters longer. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. :)

Are you going to continue inkwell

I really like this story. It is light sexy, but has a real plot... Thank you.

Ch 1 a bit shaky

going well now

Keep the chapters coming

So why does he keep fainting or passing out?

He's got the fainting sickness.

That last section was Laugh Out Loud quality!

Sorry but your writing style is a little too meandering for me... This has potential... But the chapter dedicated to finding a bed was enough for me...

-jaye-