All Comments on 'A Makeover for My Old Mum Ch. 03'

This tale just gets better and better! Now we have Elizabeth's sister being thrown into the mix it could get very interesting, and I'm pretty sure that it will do so. Don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter please! 5* from me.

Nicely paced story, love where it seems to be going.

Loving this series! Thank you!

just an idea for next chapter , lets explore bondage even further , like using ropes , tying her up in many different positions , and he start to treat her like his servant

5/28/21 Just now finished all three chapters. Good character development with realistic people. I am so tired of stories that the mom is a 38 years old and 44 DD. Would be interest to know mom knowledge of theses toys and her vocabulary. Then there’s the aunt coming to permanently stay. There a few more chapters to be written. I hope you will write them

Nice story as willymakeit said nice to have realistic people hope this is not the last as you said as it could develop very nicely especially with the sister now in the mix

So good, so hot.

It just keeps on improving. Every episode reaches greater heights of erotisism. You are a telented writer with lots to offer. Thank you for sharing with us.

Excellent developments it gets better and better. Thank you.

LOVE this tale, excellent

This chapter was a little darker than I usually preferer, but it was done in a way that wasn't totally upsetting. Dam, that woman is just insatiable.

The mother should have fingered him with two and given him a blowjob. That would cement her control over him, and show him how she felt with a plug in her ass and him in her pussy.

This is another of my favorite series of yours. Elizabeth's growth from an insecure (but secretly horny) librarian to a passionate bisexual lover (and maybe switch?) is one of my favorite character arcs. I also really love the moments of nervousness in the bondage scenes, where she's scared but also excited. I would have liked to see Katharine get a little more 'punishment' for making a move on Jack; they had all the bondage gear there but only made her pleasure them a little. Still a solid four stars and the third chapter especially is something I revisit often.