All Comments on 'A Massage for Mom's Headache Pt. 02'

by jasperspen

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It's so good can't wait for next chapter

sswillowsswillowalmost 3 years ago

You should keep this one going. Good writing and proofing.

dokonodokonoalmost 3 years ago

ohh yes this is a very good story cant wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very sexy it's making me very wet and juicy

Cant wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

knock her up, anal, love the story

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 3 years ago

Liked this chapter too. Very sexy. Hot even.

So much looking forward to more.

JuicyPussyLoverJuicyPussyLoveralmost 3 years ago

Of course now we’re all expecting future chapters! Great story line! 6⭐️S!

FeltfixerFeltfixeralmost 3 years ago
Nice

Really nice story. Sweet lovely mother.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Still a good premise.

Good buildup.

But the sex -- each happening -- is always too short. For example, the fingering of her asshole doesn't go on nearly long enough. Needs much more description of his touching the outside extensively before he inserts his finger. Perhaps some reluctance -- even if only for show -- from her would have been nice before she 'gave in' and let him/told him to put his finger inside.

Nevertheless, well written. Five stars.

Josephwayne511Josephwayne511almost 3 years ago

enjoyable, in fact had very similar experience with my dads best friends wife. i was 18 she was 36.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefalmost 3 years ago

Boy, if that don't make you hard, you must be dead. Go play your golf game Dad, Pete and Mom are going to play another game that although it does involve balls and holes, is way more hot and sexy. Now just figure a way to get Dad out of the way. Maybe he's not really playing golf with his buddies but shagging his secretary... Who knows?

Good story with the slow buildup and danger of being caught.

Firmhands5Firmhands5almost 3 years ago

So much passion and lust - even better with the participants! Am dripping now!

averagerich420averagerich420almost 3 years ago

Great story as usual.. hope another chapter is coming.

nahnahnahnahalmost 3 years ago

Very good story so far. I hope you continue it. It would also be a hot story to do a separate, or interlaced version written from the mom's point of view. Personally I think I'd prefer to have a separate story that is wholly her POV, and keep this one from his POV.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Awesome. Amazing story, please consider using anal sex in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Amazing! I need more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good one, again. Explore their feeling/emotions more with more dialogue, please. GSA doesn't happen in a vacuum. Thanks

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcalmost 3 years ago

Super hot - looking to see more development in their relationship. Wondering when her love for her step-son surpasses her husband. Going to be a great ride! 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This story is insanely well-written and erotic. The dialogue with his inner voice rings true with my memories of being an 18-year old young man. I hope this story can last a while.

TickleHerFancyTickleHerFancyalmost 3 years ago

Please write another chapter of this story. OMG, it is so hot!

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 3 years ago

Forbidden love ? Isn't it always by someone , spoilsports !! If this were the real world that marriage would have been over years ago, but this one is much more fun. Unfortunately Dad is a lot like my brother -in-law.

I say, go for it Pete keep mum onside and in bed. I think dad has a floozie down the golf club. 5 🌟

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I hope another chapter is coming!

timbrewulftimbrewulfalmost 3 years ago

you are really really good. longer trysts between the two lovers. Maybe he should shopping with her for new lingerie and revealng dresses. Love your sensitive touch and her modesty slowly giving way to lust and love. ore please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Still a good premise.

Story not a good as Chapter 1. Ditto the sex.

Four stars.

cjkm646cjkm646about 2 years ago

This is a great story. It's one of my very best-loved ones.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So far, A wonderfully erotic, yet very tender love story that has been a joy to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Another 5. Your addition of her feet to the story after having already told readers in the first story that mom has a hairy pussy (like mom's should have) makes readers want to keep seeing chapters. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Sexy Mom FEET, you got it going on! five rating!

Squrril48Squrril484 months ago

You should try a story where you slowly brainwash mom and slowly tear her morals and inabitions away a little bit at a time but to everyone else she's her Normal self so it's like mom has 2 sides to her. One side for the world to see and a secret side that only her son gets to see or slowly get her to surrender to her son a little bit at a time where he slowly gains control over her from her willing surrender and submission only to him

WoodencavWoodencav2 months ago

Just Awesome! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 1 month ago

As always 5 stars.

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