by jasperspen
Liked this chapter too. Very sexy. Hot even.
So much looking forward to more.
Of course now we’re all expecting future chapters! Great story line! 6⭐️S!
Still a good premise.
Good buildup.
But the sex -- each happening -- is always too short. For example, the fingering of her asshole doesn't go on nearly long enough. Needs much more description of his touching the outside extensively before he inserts his finger. Perhaps some reluctance -- even if only for show -- from her would have been nice before she 'gave in' and let him/told him to put his finger inside.
Nevertheless, well written. Five stars.
enjoyable, in fact had very similar experience with my dads best friends wife. i was 18 she was 36.
Boy, if that don't make you hard, you must be dead. Go play your golf game Dad, Pete and Mom are going to play another game that although it does involve balls and holes, is way more hot and sexy. Now just figure a way to get Dad out of the way. Maybe he's not really playing golf with his buddies but shagging his secretary... Who knows?
Good story with the slow buildup and danger of being caught.
So much passion and lust - even better with the participants! Am dripping now!
Very good story so far. I hope you continue it. It would also be a hot story to do a separate, or interlaced version written from the mom's point of view. Personally I think I'd prefer to have a separate story that is wholly her POV, and keep this one from his POV.
Good one, again. Explore their feeling/emotions more with more dialogue, please. GSA doesn't happen in a vacuum. Thanks
Super hot - looking to see more development in their relationship. Wondering when her love for her step-son surpasses her husband. Going to be a great ride! 5*
This story is insanely well-written and erotic. The dialogue with his inner voice rings true with my memories of being an 18-year old young man. I hope this story can last a while.
Forbidden love ? Isn't it always by someone , spoilsports !! If this were the real world that marriage would have been over years ago, but this one is much more fun. Unfortunately Dad is a lot like my brother -in-law.
I say, go for it Pete keep mum onside and in bed. I think dad has a floozie down the golf club. 5 🌟
you are really really good. longer trysts between the two lovers. Maybe he should shopping with her for new lingerie and revealng dresses. Love your sensitive touch and her modesty slowly giving way to lust and love. ore please.
Still a good premise.
Story not a good as Chapter 1. Ditto the sex.
Four stars.
So far, A wonderfully erotic, yet very tender love story that has been a joy to read.
Another 5. Your addition of her feet to the story after having already told readers in the first story that mom has a hairy pussy (like mom's should have) makes readers want to keep seeing chapters. Keep up the great work.
You should try a story where you slowly brainwash mom and slowly tear her morals and inabitions away a little bit at a time but to everyone else she's her Normal self so it's like mom has 2 sides to her. One side for the world to see and a secret side that only her son gets to see or slowly get her to surrender to her son a little bit at a time where he slowly gains control over her from her willing surrender and submission only to him