by sophiaheart
Light hearted, witty piece that felt real — could imagine as you painted. Well written; fun dialogue. On board to see where you take this relationship.
This a great set up; I can't wait to see where you are headed. am I wrong or did you never actually tell us how old Sophia is.
Pappasleaze!
Fantastic story; and I hope it is just the first part. Very well written and excellent plot development. I look forward to reading your future works.
Sitting in bed, with my coffee in hand, this was a wonderful story this Saturday morning. Please continue with Sophia's seduction by Aria, a slow one please.
Describing a character to a celebrity is a turn off - it ruins the fantasy. I had to stop at Olivia Rodrigo Sure others won't mind but a deal breaker for me.