All Comments on 'A Match for Sophia'

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MigbirdMigbirdover 1 year ago

Light hearted, witty piece that felt real — could imagine as you painted. Well written; fun dialogue. On board to see where you take this relationship.

lgaaalgaaaover 1 year ago

Hot....can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This a great set up; I can't wait to see where you are headed. am I wrong or did you never actually tell us how old Sophia is.

Pappasleaze!

maxout09maxout09over 1 year ago

Fantastic story; and I hope it is just the first part. Very well written and excellent plot development. I look forward to reading your future works.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sitting in bed, with my coffee in hand, this was a wonderful story this Saturday morning. Please continue with Sophia's seduction by Aria, a slow one please.

Elaine_MatureElaine_Matureover 1 year ago

Love your dialog! Good pacing. Nice emotional ride.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Describing a character to a celebrity is a turn off - it ruins the fantasy. I had to stop at Olivia Rodrigo Sure others won't mind but a deal breaker for me.

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