All Comments on 'A Maternal Love Affair Pt. 01'

Hope that cock grow into a Monster hehe and cuck father when he returns

You get a 3 for leaving us hanging.

more please

no story....?

missing tags for cheating, slut wife, skank, cuck, asshole son, etc.

Promising, and could well merit five stars as it progresses.

not a story yet, but has potential

I like it, good writing. But nothing happened. Please, finish it. In most cases they'd fuck, but at least get them naked,

It has the makings of a 5 but I gave you a 3. I hope to change it to a 5 when it's done. This is like asking for an evaluation of your car when it has no engine,

Nice start, like the slow build up...looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you all for your lovely, constructive feedback, and for the messages I have received. Please do rest assured that this is simply the introduction. Part 2 is currently pending.

J.x

You're off to a hot start.

A tender and realistic beginning to a special love story. So many taboo memoirs begin with an "Aha Moment".

Carry On ! ! !

Very good start,,,,

YEAHHhhhhh.. Great story..!!! 5 Stars..!!!!

Nice start to a great story Gave it3 (no incest)

A good start. I found your writing style easy to follow, and I'll be checking out your other work :-)

Liked the story but no incest 4 stars