Nice build up to the story but could have used a little character description. Hot sex scenes that leave us wanting to read more. Hopefully another chapter soon. Thanks, MLF
Male, 60+, writer of erotica. To bring the reader in to a story, make them see what you see, make them feel what you feel, so they can visualize what is happening inside their head, like watching a film or play. In writing, that's what I aspire to do. I have been writing ero...