All Comments on 'A Meeting in March'

The story started off as a good story. Then when you started jumping back and fort on dates it made the story very hard to understand. It distracted me from the story itself and made it hard to read. I think that someone else editing this would have helped with the flow of the story. When you write it is too easy to see the whole picture in our mind and forget to bring the reader along in your writing to that picture.

I have to disagree with the previous comment. I thought it was a very moving story and I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read more of your work

Cheater

Another cheating slut story, story didn't flow well and quite frankly I struggled to get through it with it jumping back and forth..