All Comments on 'A Meeting of Minds Ch. 01'

Can’t wait to see where you take it. Hopefully it’s a long one like time stopper and shed.

5 stars and worth it. Hell its even complete and that’s rare for Literotica. Oh the originality goes a long way too.

But confusing as hell. I really couldn't figure out why what was going on was going on.

Frankly, disappointing.

Unusual and clever.

Never come across the word "erected" before (in the sense of getting an erection)

You're tapping into an old fantasy of mine -- so long-ago I'd pretty much forgotten about it.

I'm glad Jackie's as thoroughly into it all as Charley is.

I like the subtle humour too.

Looking forward to where it leads.

Love the premise and the direction you are taking it. I enjoyed his nervousness over possibly being found walking down the street naked with an erection. Amazing the things that someone can think up to worry about but hey, welcome to the human condition. On to chapter 2.

Hi, I read your bio, oh and meeting of the minds, first I love your name, its so.....well, funny the one person talking about "erected", funny, anyway your use of the "third person" was well done even your boiler done same well you seem to have a lot of stories I'm definitely going to read more, all of them, not sure, just on how many thanks for a great read, and I've thought of this situation many times before reading yours

Thanx

Could not get behind what you was saying

I've said it before Max your imagination is rife with extraordinary situations. But I do wonder is it always a true swap, or could a situation arise where it is possible to have two versions of either Jackie or Charley on the streets, so to speak. Also I was wondering why are you using the feminine of his name ? instead of Charlie now I am wondering if that choice is more apt.

So much fun!! Seems like fantasy rather than non, but either way a great story to come.

Sorry, way to complcated..