by annag98
...but I'm going to stick my neck out and say that so far, this is possibly your best piece of work to date (and that's saying something). And this is where the whimsical part of my mind comes into play: could Anna and Jen be reincarnations of Arthur and Guinevere or (more likely) Lancelot and Guinevere? That should keep me wondering until Part 02 appears.
It's amazing how you take a bit of data and weave it into an erotic story that brings the reader the same pleasures that you bring to life. The mind of Jen bringing you to that hilltop by entering your sleeping mind was so inspirational. She was a subissive seductress who led you where you needed to be. The dance and mutual masturbation was a stroke of genius and led to even more later in your room where you found she was submissive and pleasured you from her knees. Of course, you knew that from her use of Miss earlier. This was another hit with a diffent twist. I loved it.
Top notch. Well done. You're one of my favourite writers. I know the location well, as I live just over the border in Wales.
Loved the story Anna! I’ll read it to the girls tomorrow - lots of love...
I kinda sleep walked into this myself,appropriately enough. There I was minding my own business and suddenly was whisked off to Somerset, England. I wanted a visual impression so I opened Google Earth and from where I sit in Upper Midwest , Dysfunctional States of America, found Glastonbury Tor. I think I could still make a hike like that. Of course I had heard of Glastonbury because of the concerts but once I become curious about a place I often take a virtual view.
Going back to the story, Anna, I totally enjoyed it. The element of mystery sucked me in not to mention two lovely women discovering each other. A nice way to spend part of a winter evening. Thank you! I look forward to more.
You are such a gifted writer and a gift to this site! Looking forward to part 2, Miss Anna.
<3
Suzy
I love the erotic mental intertwining in this story, and the way the narrative flows purringly along from the outset... (it got my pussy purring before long!). I'm on tenterhooks for the next instalment!
Love and hugs
Marixxxxx
Thank you so much Anna for writing this and suggesting I read it - so beautiful LL
Even by your exalted standards, which is saying something, this is hot. Intriguing plot-line, a mysterious sexy stranger who likes to be called “little one” - what’s not to love. 5 stars and rushing onto the next chapter xx
Such an amazingly erotic story. A simple elegance so beautifully transferred from your mind to ours. It is such a delight to read your work. I love this so much. Well defined characters fill the scenes with warmth and passion. Such a wonderful story.
since I read one of your stories but the wait was worthwhile. A magical story which had the same effect on me as your muse had on you.
A spontaneous lesbian encounter does seductively intrigue the members visually. Keep writing more.
I can honestly say this has been one of the erotic short story's I've read in years, great story line , I'm begging for more !
Great use of adjectives, sentences like ....My attention wasn't on the beautiful scenery, the warm air or the birdsong.
I'm hooked on your story's ...thank you so much for sharing your mind with us
5 + stars
Hugs
Mia x