All Comments on 'A Menage Ch. 02 Pt. 01'

Your characters are interesting though I seem to know more about the father than his new wife. Does not matter at this point because I did not read part one.

You have given this married woman three attributes I enjoy in a woman. She is not endowed with more bust than a normal babe, and she has hair on her vagina which is a very nice way of telling us she thinks for herself, and the she has a wanton nature her husband understands. Good stuff.

This friend and fellow guitar player is a great idea. The line of, "is that your sister, and can I get a date," was excellent! Leaving them at the dinner table with step mommy in her jeans shows promise. Don't make her a total slut. The norm would have her slightly put off by a friend of her step-sons assuming she was an easy lay. Make him work for it and then bring a band groupie bearing cocaine to a casual outing in a club.

Sloppy seconds wimp ass son the family cum dump.