All Comments on 'A Midnight Slave 01'

I anxiously await chapter two, and to carry out your every wish...

birth control?

I can’t decide if it’s Rob or some sexy voyeur. Either way it’s hot!

Thank you for your feedback. It's my first time submitting anything ever, so this is pretty exciting for me. I'm wrapping up the second chapter this weekend so I promise I will post soon.

Very nice. This is a particular fantasy of mine and reading it was quite enjoyable. Looking forward to more.

I'm sure these are borrowed versions of Anne Elliot and Fred Wentworth from Persuasion??? Anyway, love them and liked this, too. It was Alex, I think. Please post soon, hope it's not abandoned.

Hi guys sorry for the delay, but I've been working crazy hours and I will try to finish chapter 2 and 3 within the next few weeks. Btw I love Persuasion too, but it's not related. Didnt even think of it lol. Thanks for all the nice comments. Keeps the passion going <3

Exquisite and enchanting. Exceptionally well written!