by Colleen Thomas
This is a marvelous piece of work; when you call your characters "lovers" it is more than just a cliche; these two really are in love. They seemed quite natural together, and I as the reader found myself quite fond of the both of them. That made the story all the more enjoyable.
Colleen, I have read your advice about writing lesbian scenes. You follow your own advice and do it with aplomb. We learn to care about both the characters, they take their time, so many lovely sensations. Added to that, a good sense of humor rounds out the bouquet. Bravisimo!
Very creative idea and I loved all of poor Dawn's reactions. She is a trip. Sensuous and also highly entertaining with the little battle they waged between them. Thanks for the smiles and great story
I think this is one of your best stories,I cum twice just reading it without touching my pussy.Keep up the good work.
With lots of luv Jenny Cook
Your characters are so easy to love that I couldn't stop reading.
How wonderful that a butch becomes femme, even for a night. May you write more like this.
You have a smooth, admirable style. Well textured and also carefully edited for brevity. Nicely done!
Great story.
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regards VvV
everything here is awesome,I miss your writings colleen Thomas.i'm always praying for your celestial bless.
Very much enjoyed this story and yes I too laughed at its ending.