- Fetish
- A Milky Dillema
- Page 2
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Click hereThe intense sexuality of her act caught me off guard and I stood flabbergasted with my mouth open. She broke out laughing causing me to break out of my shock and join her in laughing.
"I'm sorry, I just had to do it" She explained. This is where our flavour of playful teasing and flirtatious acts met reality, and it caught me off guard.
"You caught me off guard!" I responded.
"You should be glad I didn't call you daddy!" She added laughing
My cock twitched when she said daddy, I didn't expect I would find that so hot.
I knew I needed to find some kind of comeback, and thought quickly.
"Well, it's great we finally found something you're truly good at."
She turned toward me with a shocked look. "You!" She exclaimed. She proceeded to repeatedly hit me on the shoulder in a playful way, which looked ridiculous with her still exposed boobs swinging violently on her body.
I insisted on helping her clean the bathroom. We pretty much used up all the toilet paper in the room but we got it done. I was increasingly curious how the milk tasted, but I wasn't going to lick it from a bathroom wall. Still, I was confident I'd get taste is someday. When we were all done she proceeded by putting her bra on. It was a huge thing, I could tell her head would fit into one of the cups. I looked on, fascinated, as she tried to put the huge thing on.
She looked up at me.
"Why don't you help me, instead of just looking?" She asked me, in a playful arrogant way.
I stood behind her and started to get to work on the six clasps that held the thick band. I tried to see if there was a tag somewhere, I was very curious about her bra size, but I couldn't find one.
As we finally exited the bathroom the coolness of the hallway was pleasant. In total we'd only spent about 30 minutes in there, yet so much happened it felt like an eternity.
"I guess I need to go home." Alice announced. "In a few hours I'll need to milk again, so I need to get to my backup pump."
"Yeah my hands are getting pretty tired anyway." I responded, as if she was willing to go through this again today.
Alice just smiled and went in for a quick hug "Bye".
When I returned to the desk in the hallway, where I'd left all of my stuff, I sat down. The biology lesson had long ended. I should go find the teacher to hand in the project, and make up some excuse for disappearing.
As I strolled through the hallways in a nearly empty school I pondered what I'd text Alice as an icebreaker. I had just gotten the golden ticket, and I would be dating the most pretty, perfect girl I'd ever known.
- COMMENTS
dasgoodshit9 months agoDecent first story. In the future, focus on the characters and let them guide you through their thought processes. Only they know how the story should proceed. Let them tell you what they are thinking and feeling, and let their desires spill onto the page.
Also, just so you know, you can submit changes to stories you've published, and not just the text, but the category, tags, title, etc., so if you realize that you misspelled a word in the title or something, you can submit a change to correct it.
John237over 1 year agoFor a first effort - BRAvo (see what I did there? - ya, lame) seriously, a nice base hit on your first at bat. I agree with the reviewer who thought more dialog would have enhanced the story greatly. Swing for the fence and give us a grand slam!!
The encounter itself lacked depth and dialog, explored sexual tension release was left unspoken in their mutual magical moment. I gave you four stars.
I wanted to know they began dating and then perhaps you could extend the fantasy out further into the near future with him “assisting her” on a regular basis… Perhaps other chapters to be written? You’ve got great bones here, now develop them and explore the fun. Thanks for sharing the fantasy with us readers.
Anonymousover 1 year agoInteresting premise.
But if you're going to write about a DILEMMA, spell it that way, not DILLEMA.
Once he hets his hands on her tits, there's no tension at all. He squeezes. Milk comes out.
Needs dialog. Needs discussion about how good his hands feel on her tits. Needs her directing him how to use his hands. Needs some involvement of/with her nipples.
Needs her asking him if he likes her big breasts. Has he ever thought about them when he masturbates? What does he imagine doing to/with them?
Maybe, instead of the abrupt blowjob, she could have offered him a chance to titty fuck her to see how nice they felt other than in his hands.
Would he like to kiss them? Lick her nipples? Suck them? Dring some of her milk?
Too many opportunities not explored.
Three stars.
MadMargraveover 1 year agoNot bad for your first story! It was a pretty hot situation.
Definitely need work on your dialog though. The conversations sounded like they were written by a 15 year old that has only ever watched porn.
That said it’s something you can improve on in time and you should be proud you had the courage to write. Congrats!
