All Comments on 'A Moment in Time'

of this story. An excellent blend of romance and eroticism and a wonderful reflection of a most unforgettable experience.

The second person voice can be clumsy in a story, but I must say you handle it very deftly. Apart from the fact that you obviously make a habit of tenderness, I enjoy the apparently trivial bits of information ... "the family scrabble", "the eyelets in the coverlet" ... that enrich your stories. And you use the right amount of verbal cleverness ... "my breathing crossed over from the conscious to the un", e.g. ... just enough to endear and not to overwhelm. Keep up the good work.

A lovely little tale, nicely executed and as someone else has said romantic yet erotic as well. Thank you.