All Comments on 'A Moment's Distraction'

by Verhaalen

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excessively wordy and not very interesting.

phallicfunphallicfunover 1 year ago

Great story, well told. Thank you.

Geezer83Geezer8310 months ago

Brains and desires, who could resist Elodie?

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A short story writer in various genres. Of Dutch birth but living in the UK for many years. I appreciate comments but do not respond to them, sorry.