All Comments on 'A Mom's Twisted Boyfriend'

by timmywells

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suckermansuckermanover 6 years ago
good story

personally I prefer cleanliness with just that natural odour but when I was much younger I fantasised being dominated like this. Happened a couple of times too. Keep it up Timmy the only disappointing thing is that while you have a thin small penis it seems from some of you stories its a reasonable length. Personally I think that a cock isnt small until its around my size hard ie a thin 4"

gmag47gmag47over 6 years ago

Hope theres a part 2 and 3

timmywellstimmywellsover 6 years agoAuthor
Timmy here... an apology

Literotica recently introduced new features for authors to submit their work, and obviously I screwed up because this is not the whole story.

Therefore,I will turn this into part 1 of a 2 part story, the rest will follow soon. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
definitely prefer cleanliness and zero body odor too..

would really like much more detail on the sex part of the story line...still...gave you a 5 though...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good attemp...

Not bad. Next time, though, you might want to actually keep the names of your characters in order. The guy went from Vince Burton to Vince Oliva in just a few paragraphs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You're 5 Stars Timmy

Loved the theme and your writing!

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