All Comments on 'A Mother Falls Prey: Ch. 01'

by Visceral_Dreamer

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Realdeal123Realdeal123about 2 years ago

I just hope that Rodney isn't your average generic sub looser who doing nothing in this kind of situation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

holy molly that was some story can't wait for the next instalment

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I hope that Rodney is an average generic sub loser who does nothing (besides get hurt) in this kind of situation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I hope you made this different from your other work but it wasn't your style just isn't for me

More of Soul71 style and your the other side coin

But hey best of luck

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I feel like I read this somewhere before, but idk where. Or atleast it seems so familiar.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

hope he supports his mom and she fights the bully and does not submit as for her son grow some and don't get turned on by it fight for her she would for youi

novoz511novoz511about 2 years ago

Yeah, i think this story is stolen

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I’m going to withhold judgment. Sort of exciting, sort of morbid

Visceral_DreamerVisceral_Dreamerabout 2 years agoAuthor

novoz511 you're welcome to try and find it somewhere. You won't have much luck given that I wrote it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

2nd part

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

2 part

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Years ago I read a story on this site, kinda similar. There was a friend/girlfriend that convinces a guy to let a friend crash with his mom. The mom thinks son's friend think of her as a cool mom. Instead they think of her as a MILF. The guy slowly seduces mom. Then son, heard them. Eventually, mom realizes she's not a cool mom, rather a milf. She fucks another friend of her son's. To get back at the guy who used her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Carry on, I like it, but please, don't let another bastard join it. Just Dane. I'm sick of the gang bang in every mother bullying story like this. But I'd love it if Rodney got Dane's mom or his sister or whatever and they did it together. Then after that, began their journey of conquering the mothers of their other friends, but there was no need to invite them to join the club :D

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11about 2 years ago

Anon wrote: "Years ago I read a story on this site, kinda similar. There was a friend/girlfriend that convinces a guy to let a friend crash with his mom. The mom thinks son's friend think of her as a cool mom. Instead they think of her as a MILF. The guy slowly seduces mom."

YES! I would love to find that old story. There is so much bully-mom stuff, and I liked this story, but the one you describe featured a scheming girl who set the whole thing in motion....

lawyerwifelawyerwifealmost 2 years ago

SO hot, so believable.

doorknob22doorknob224 months ago

Perfect concept and execution. Well done.

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