All Comments on 'A Mother: Tempted and Seduced'

Hope you continue to expand on this story.

That was pretty fucking hot. Please tell us you'll have further adventures of Annabelle and Fiona. I'd love to see Fiona's idea of Annabelle seducing straight women come to fruition. It would make an awesome series. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

WoW. that was HOT. Like others I hope you give us more of this duo. I was surprised of two thigs though, 1) That annabelle didn't get two see the messages left by sylvie or the client. and the 2) that Fiona picked paula and not Carol her secretary. Great story. 5 stars!

Pappasleaze!

Thanks for the feedback Anonymous. There was no reason for Annabelle to look at her mother’s phone, it didn’t occur to me that she would. The second point is interesting, in the first draft, I did identify Carol as the ‘target,’ but then changed my mind. I wanted to broaden the scope a little and introduce a new character who was older than Fiona. The thought of 18 year old Annabelle seducing a straight woman of fifty seemed really hot.

This was all time good and oh so fucking hot

Once again you have done such a superb job of storytelling. I felt how you told the story showed real class, the denial, the knowing but not wanting to give in and then once Fiona realised her true feelings and overcame the concern about social conformity. They could move on from that and enjoy their lives together. I can see a long storyline developing with these two characters. Well done.

The passage that made the story memorable for me and now stands out for me and my taste in stories is on page 3, where at the pub when Fiona gets the message from Ms DuPont but instead of replying, ignoring her, making her wait. A true Mistress in the making. She or they could end up with a harem of willing women to satisfy their lustful libidos.

5 stars +

Excellent

Such a Merry -go-Round..with ladies Cumming and going.in a mixed bag of sexual activities…mothers and daughters ,clients. and lawyers…Free-for -all!

Hard to keep ‘‘em straight!

Such pleasure to spread around!

Thanks!

That was lovely, sensual, and erotic, even if it wasn't incest. But, you have certainly laid the ground for some interesting sequels, like a second encounter with Fiona and her client, or Annabelle and her driving instructor Paula. Somewhere in this array of lovely ladies is a delightful Sapphic threesome. So many possibilities, so little time. Thank you for this tasty prelude.

First class story telling. The plot, the characters, the overall detail and the SEX and STOCKINGS, soo soo hot. Brilliant.

Thanks for all of your feedback Stockings_and_heels