All Comments on 'A mother's 50th Birthday'

Surely sister Jane will understand mom's frustration and might be more than eager to share in comforting her.

Mom needs to drop that creampieon somebodies face.

Please, give us more, it was a wonderful story.

A part 2 is up to you!! The story could stand alone as is to me!! An ending like that is good for the imagination. Thanks for sharing.

Loved it can't wait for the next part thank you!!!

wow hell of a start. would love to see how it plays out

That was the best story I have read in a long time. Please develop it more and tell us how Nick found her out.

I had a great time reading this story and am ready to read the rest of it.

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex. Jane coming gives so many possibilities. My speculation is Nick messaged her.

Beautiful story. Please continue

Well written. Looking forward the next chapter.

Great First chapter...

I really enjoyed reading this, you have great writing style. I'm also anxious for the next chapter so you are now in my Favorites so I don't miss it!

I agree with a previous comment, the story could stand alone, but I hope you do continue with a second, or more chapters to fill out the story from the son's point of view as well as the daughter's. This has the makings of a good love story.

That was hot.

Anxiously waiting next chapter.

I liked how this story built up. It was a good read. Ready for the next chapter.

Awsome need more

A good start to a story and don't believe it to be stand alone as others have stated, spending a number of paragraphs paying the foundation and make g introductions.

This has the legs to go so much further.

Good story; liked the surprise twist that the son figured out it was his mom videoing; intense fuck. Keep on writing - clearly more to this story.

Best story i have read on here recently , unfortunately i could only give it 5 stars , there has to be more to come from this writer , well done to you mate from a fellow Brit , please hurry with next chapter

That ending...wow!!! My jaw dropped! I'll be following you on to see what's next.

You are a, excellent writer. More please

Good build up, interesting characters and a great story line! Yes, more please!

Definitely need more of this one.

Most differently , we want more. Sounds like this would be even more interesting if u add a few more chapters. Heck, If u did, I could read about 10 more chapters and next get disinterested. This story could get very interesting !!!!!!

I REALLY liked the build up but.....it went from build up to climax way too fast IMO. Coulda used a lot more foreplay, teasing, voyuerism, reluctance, seduction, etc.

But don't be disappointed, that's just my personal preference. You clearly have skills in writing! I look forward to more!

Just one comment daughter joins in admits she had seen brothers dick on a few occasions.

more asap

Mom and son need to continue and have sis join in with them. And also start spending dads money like there's no tomorrow.

nice

Loved it! Please keep it going. We need to know what happens next!

Great story, does need another chapter or to to finish it off..

A chapter one from Dec. 2019. No new chapter after 3 years. However it story doesn't need a 2nd chapter! 5 BIG ASS STARS!

Its 15th April 2024.

Chapter 2 coming anytime soon?

I sure hope so.

It's like you've finished right in the middle of a good story.

Nice cliff hanger .