by CazzyGoth
Fucking rubbish...no mention of mummy having balls and a cock at the start...garbage !!!
You should have a short warning at the top of the first page warning readers of the content tags that your story contains. A futa warning would've been appreciated. Not to mention more background and details.
Right now it's just an unpleasant surprise that doesn't make any sense.
I dunno, I thought you did a fine job of mentioning mom's dick early on without having to come out and say it--it gives you a more gradual seduction. Looking forward to chapter 2!
FFS, people. Don't hiss and moan at the author because you couldn't take 2 seconds to check the tags. You know, the tags? Those things under the button with a picture of tags on it? That gives you a list of the fetishes in the story? Those things?
A great first effort. A bit more proofreading and you'll be an ace. I'll follow to read some more.