by Homerotic
This was a great story. I can't wait to see what's next!
You will have to continue this saga, maybe from Estelle's perspective this time, go into the history in more depth that led to her arrest and subsequent life with May and Cole, then extend to find out about May's second Cole child.
I have enjoyed both story lines immensely, keep up the good work.
Very much liked this story and definitely cleared up some of the things which were very disheartening in "Crash n Burn".
What an awesome series of events Would be cool to discover that the guy in the ice was actually the officer that had molested Estelle.. Got the feeling that Maise could have hooked up with May or with May's Mom. Don't think for a minute that being 80 shuts everything done..
I was one of the crushed fans when you said crash & burn was ended with so many holes!
But viewing the life story happenings from different points of view is an amazing change of pace to the typical stories, even when some change of view is thrown in for accent or color to a specific scene. This change of view of what was important during each of the events in the life of the family at the time is great.
Point of view was a great thriller movie, because every person sees the same scene in time differently!
Well done, keep it up!!!!
you should have been happy to have the second child and not to become your sons baby machine how do u teel everyone including your family now that your husband is dead and never knew his and your son is your childs father to me is bad that you would decide to have another of your sons children bad mamma bad u became a selfish bitch a crazy bitch as nate had u pegged, story or not author thin k about it
it was a good ending filled the abruptness that the main story had in its ending the only bad things were this really hurt the mothers image as her shacking up with nate left a bad taste but then her letting him in and he magically becoming someone other than he has been all his life was unrealistic I'd more believe his reasoning being he realized he doesn't really have a stable place to live and is trying to worm his way back in after his lifetime of being neglectful to his son and using his wife for sexual relief I felt killing him off was more a way to get the results that the reader would like best since the majority of readers hated him being in the picture while at the same time reinforcing the groundwork that he has matured when to me it just looked like he was playing up trying to be in his sons life to keep getting into the moms pants I honestly would have expected him to be caught cheating and been thrown out for good that way
It may be bad of me but I'm glad Mate is gone never liked him.
I can't wait to read more about this family, all of them not just Cole, Stelle, and May
EXCELLENT 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Congratulations on an impressive work, your imagination has worked wonders with this scenario.