All Comments on 'A Mother's Lust Ch. 01'

Thanks for the read.

It isn't good enough to be rated "Borderline Boring"

Pay no attention to the Anon's, most of us writers completely ignore them. It's a good start, maybe embellish more on the relationship between your two characters that will flesh the story out more, but otherwise, you are on the right track.

You have something , a little rushed , build up the story with a little more detail . Ignore the comments that are just negative . Maybe more verbal sparring ,let the anger out .have him figure out how to get the best out of her through trial and error ! Good luck !

This story has me intrigued. Can't wait to read more.

Boring and hardly any boob play, sucking or sqeezing!! Disappointed!!!

Dang, that was good but I wish that there was a bit more sexy stuff in this one and that one wouldn’t have to wait for the other parts

As a start to a torrid affair, you have set the stage for a mature dominant woman to take advantage of a young man.