by CouplingKnight
This is one of the best stories I have read so far . Wonderful imagination . A big pat on the back. Give us more
Very well written however you've picked up on the bad habit others use here at Literotica, the dot dot dot habit!
Constructive Criticism only. 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVE STARS!
A little better, six and seven together might make a reasonable chapter of combined.