All Comments on 'A Mother's Mistake?'

I hope there is a part 2, part 3 and more coming.

Great start! Please continue to the next chapter.

Next chapter

Find an editor, story was hard to follow and you need to understand how to write dialog.

Very nice, but I am not interested in any BDSM stories.

Good story good writing let’s see where this goes lots of road to go down can’t wait to find out.

Boooooring 🥱🥱

Please ignore the people who tell you what they don't want, and write what pleases you!!

wet dream!!!

Totally enjoyed this

Needs a follow-up. He should do the lady at the bakery .

I agree that this story is a good start and I hope you continue. The BDSM aspect is a hard road because of the varied levels and what your readers are more drawn to in the lifestyle.

There needs to be a clear line drawn between the varied female characters and how he treats them differently. The friends mom is looking for something from him, the mom's friend has a certain role that you briefly started to cover and now mom... She needs to hold a higher level then his other harem sluts.

Not bad. Realistic, eh... Close enough. But word of advice. Cops would know the owner of the apartment and put two and two together quickly.

A hot story but the spelling was bad. Many words were spelled wrong. Probably not caught because then ere spelled as different words.

Loved this part of the story but I hope you continue you can't quit now and leave us hanging dry 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!

Cartoonish and messy story.

More. He needs to turn all three milfs into his personal cumdumps. He should make them call him Daddy while he pounds their phat asses. Watching his mommy sluts eat his nut out of each others holes. Collar and leashing his milf fucktoys. Leading them as they crawl to the bathroom on hands and knees. Making his pets make out while he marks his territory.

To short!

Silly and cartoon-like. Crap grammar as well.

Silly, immature. Proof read......WHALE vs wail......ANGEL vs angle and several more......

Liked the story but it was to damn short!!!!!!!!!!! 4 stars

Loved the story but is this a one fling thing???????????? CONTINUE 5 stars

My cock isn't that big, it's only a hand and a half long. The average length of an adult male's hand is 7.6 inches. So his cock is only 11 inches. That's not over the top at all.