All Comments on 'A Mother's Request'

by JohnnyThrust

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muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Need to add some romance and affection. The wife had zero to do with the story, and might be better left out. Not much of an ending unless you are adding a final chapter. If that is your plan you should say so.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

so-so. I hate that he was cheating on his wife. Shaved pussies are childish. Next chapter?

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53about 1 year ago

Made absolutely no sense to me.

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