by Satin and Lace
Of course this sort of thing happens every day,you make it sound so casual.This lacks a build up to the seduction scene,you dont just do it.Never mind it was still a good story,and it is erotic ,albeit a bit fanciful.So maximum from me.,some will love it some will probably be highly critical.
Well done,looking forward to part Due. This is erotic and if not mistaken, that is where we are. So keep on writing.
I like that the author brought out the love that was shared between mother and son.
Well written and edited plus very erotic sex scenes between mom and her son.
Just a very loving story, thanks for the read
So arousing and well written. It speaks of experience being re-lived in your writing. I will be a fan of yours. Thank you.
someone who wrote my dearest fantasy dream on the planet... learning from mom before doing sex with someone else.
Poor punctuation my ass! I couldn't get past the second paragraph due to the poor grammar and sentence structure, pure CRAP!
All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love