All Comments on 'A Mother's Son'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Minus 2

Poor punctuation my ass! I couldn't get past the second paragraph due to the poor grammar and sentence structure, pure CRAP!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 8 years ago

I could only give it 3 stars due to the horrible punctuation.

psychopat78psychopat78over 9 years ago
My dearest dream

someone who wrote my dearest fantasy dream on the planet... learning from mom before doing sex with someone else.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
it's so nice...

when a boy's first fuck is his own mother. A great story.

JustCuriousSDJustCuriousSDover 11 years ago
Fantastic

So arousing and well written. It speaks of experience being re-lived in your writing. I will be a fan of yours. Thank you.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
A very sweet story

I like that the author brought out the love that was shared between mother and son.

Well written and edited plus very erotic sex scenes between mom and her son.

Just a very loving story, thanks for the read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Punctuation, needs work

Hard to follow because of faulty punctuation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Lovely

Well done,looking forward to part Due. This is erotic and if not mistaken, that is where we are. So keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Everyday

Of course this sort of thing happens every day,you make it sound so casual.This lacks a build up to the seduction scene,you dont just do it.Never mind it was still a good story,and it is erotic ,albeit a bit fanciful.So maximum from me.,some will love it some will probably be highly critical.

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