All Comments on 'A Needed Vacation Ch. 01'

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Sexywife104Sexywife104over 11 years ago
Hot!

Can't wait for the next chapter. Surely fantasy will become reality!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Try breaking down into shorter paragraphs

It would be so much more reader friendly.

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