All Comments on 'A Nerd's Birthday'

good elements of a forced sex story, however it could have been much better. The characters were good, but with a few more sentences on each, and at each segui could have been great. It is almost like a good writer who was just a bit lazy writing the story. The actual rape itself begged for more work and detail.

This reads like the "cliff note" version of a story. Surely the old guys can get it up twice. What about her ass? With the woman to help him, how about a few more sexual positions?

I think there should be several more towns to visit and a lot more future chapters.